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Good Job

Some of the art could be better. Quite a few times the animation was jumpy, so watch out for that. It didn't really make sense to me when the guy ran from one tree to another, but that may just be me xD

Keep up the work :)

Haha

Nice job Camron, it's been awhile xD Your art is getting a lot better, though it could be better yet still. Little disappointed you didn't draw the Moon. A nice, entertaining short, keep it up.

P.S. Loved the OVA song thrown in there xD

Pretty Good

The animation was very nice and smooth. The art could have been better. There was a lot of problems with proportion. Everything was timed nicely and had a good atmosphere to it.

Definitely need to include Trunks, Tapion, and the Animal Crossing guys xD

Good

The game functioned like it was supposed to and there was a decent number of upgrades. The art was okay, but some improvement could be made there. Also, a little disappointing the only game was deer. Could of had lower levels be small mammals and birds and then work up to deer, bear, moose, etc, which would of added difficulty and interest.

Overall good job :)

Good Game

The game itself was good. However the go veg message isn't :P

Due to recent laws in the U.S. horse neglect is up and many of them starve because of groups like PETA. If the animal industry goes under, which it won't, most of the existing livestock would just be left for dead. It costs a lot to feed them, I know that for a fact, and is pointless to keep them as pets.

Nice

Good presentation and you actually forced people to learn. How could you? It was a fairly short tut, but like the person below said, you could of added a bit more to it. Plus, the info there was good so elaborating some could of only made it better.